BOW DOWN TO THE KING
REBLOG IF YOU EVER SEE THE CREATOR OF TUMBLR .
Rule one: Reblog the creator.Rule two: If you don’t blog the creator, get off of Tumblr
Rule three: It is impossible to ignore rule one so rule two is generally invalid.
So, here is my two characters Ryaki Reinsworth & Mars Mashumaro.
Ryaki is a hedgehog and Mars is a panda. I dont mind about a critique about them, if you wanna give me something~ I am glad about that what they look right now, but if you wanna give a tips, should I change something, is…
Well first, thank you very much for this! ^^
I am glad you like my art style, I know it’s not really basic ‘Sonic art’, but this is how I had learn it and I am okay with it.I do agree with Mars’ design what you say about him. And he have a reason why he use that red scarf and he had always had it and I am gonna keep it. The chain there, keeps small emerald, so it’s like a necklace, it shows out in other pictures better and not in this one. ^^ So, sorry about it, but there is reason too why it’s there and it’s about the story.
And… couldn’t not agree more with Ryaki. XD; I think I had design them more with… ‘anime character’ style, to be honest. And yes, he is a fucking detailed mania and I wanna change that.
I do like this jacket mostly and his hair, othet thinks could be changed, because he got so much details on him (and not sure about headphones, because they are there because he loves music). I am details ‘crazy’, I make them alot and I am sorry about that.
And to be honest with you, I like this critique, you shows those same points I had saw before :) I think I just like too much details in the characters…? Haha, but I think the trouble is Ryaki and I do wanna change him simply looking. And, yes, you can re-draw him. XD;
I am sorry, I dont know should I have reblogged and give my own option back!(?) But I just wanted to say, you actually give a good critique and I like it alot! <3
Yes, I don’t have anything mesmerizing to say, but I’ll still do it because of reasons. XD”
Welp, first of all I, too, agree that they don’t fit in with the ‘normal Sonic style’ kind of way, but I personally really love this. It might be because I just really love many details in the character’s looks (and personality of course too), but all of these little details do not seem really out of place to me as a whole. (Just personal likes/dislikes of course)
I don’t know if you (as in Seuris. Yes, YOU~) are/were striving to fit your characters in that particular… ‘universe’, story- and design-wise, but to me it’d be a loss if you’d really make… Ryaki looking more…’blank’. I know you can make simple designs look really pretty and whatnot, but I don’t know. I’m fucking in love with his hair. (Mars of course too. <3 Lil’ cutie-pie)
I don’t think what I’ve written ‘til now has actually gotten my point across. I’m damn terrible at describing it for some reason lol
But yes, if you want your characters to wholly fit in with the Sonic Universe, their designs are really too detailed and should be subdued. (Many details do not mean it looks bad however. In my opinion, to put it bluntly, they’re really fine. But I love drawing more detailed characters too, so I don’t know if my opinion is good pff)
EXCUSE ME MY BAD RESPONSE. *scurries off*
Imagine your OTP going out, and Person A is a horrible tease all night - gorgeous clothes, suggestive glances, “accidental” touches. And then they finally get home, and Person B shoves them against the barely-closed door andtakes all of their frustration out on them, much to Person A’s delight.
Excuse me my obession.
SO NOT SORRY ACTUALLY, SORRY.*steals* MINE, ALL MINE, MWAHAHAHA.
*forever touching them*
who is reblogging WHO’S SHIT NOW?! XD
I don’t like re-reblogging my pics. But I did it. *casually dies*
Excuse me my obession.
SO NOT SORRY ACTUALLY, SORRY.LOOK AT HOW THIS WOMAN DRAWS SO AMAZINGLY
TELL ME YOUR SECREEEETTTSSS-
<3
ajsfjäfädakvad. I was trying to do Adoptables! But my mind goes all like “LOL, NOPE YOU’LL DRAW THIS” and then THIS happened and I’m surprised at the outcome. *sobs*
Also, pressure sensitivity. Should use it more often. uhhuehue
The Onion Cupcakes OC Couples Quiz
First, pick a few of your couples. No more than five and no less than two (you can do more or less if you really want to but it might be really long or really short…).
Fidelis x Caedes
Answer the following questions from the guy’s perspective (or, in the case of same sex couples, the one who wears the pants in the relationship or whoever you want to go first…)
1. What exactly was it about this partner that he was attracted to?
Fidelis: Who doesn’t go for looks first? …Alright, okay, since we met when we were young, where I didn’t care for looks in a romantic way, I think it was his attitude that struck me first.
2. So, here’s a scenario for you: some guy is hitting relentlessly on your significant other? What do you do?
Fidelis: Either watch them (hopefully) getting dumped, if not… *crosses his arms sternly* If they dare to touch too, I hope they’re prepared to get some bones broken.
3. Where did they take their significant other to on their first date? Details plz!
Fidelis: I went out with Caedes several times. *raises an eyebrow* Do you count all of these as ‘dates’ or just some of them? Either way, to me it was when we went hunting. …Arjun said it doesn’t count as a date, is that true?
4. So, do you think of yourself as possessive?
Fidelis: Some people comment on it, but what is so abnormal that I’m just making sure that no one else touches him in an unappropriate way? Or interrupt his flirtings at times when it gets out of hand? I want him all to myself, isn’t that normal?
5. Do you regret taking in your significant other?
Fidelis: We may fight at times, he may gets me quite frustrated too. But never will I regret being with him.
6. Any angry Ex’s we need to be aware of?
Fidelis: *runs a hand through his hair and grins abit* Hmh, I don’t think so. I haven’t been much of a relationship person before. And I don’t think Arjun disapproves of my relationship with Caedes. He broke up with me after all, it wouldn’t make sense. And Caedes told me that I’m his first serious partner, so I guess I don’t have to worry for his exes to come after me either. …?
7. What physical traits do you find most attractive about your significant other?
Fidelis: *chuckles* What not? But I love it when he leaves his hair open for me. It’s really soft… *gets lost in thought*
8. Are they hot?
Fidelis: Yes, and he’s mine. *smirks*
9. Do you think YOU’RE hot?
Fidelis: Am I not? I, for one, believe I am. Don’t try to prove me otherwise.
10. Have you met your significant other’s family? What was the outcome of that meeting if you have?
Fidelis: *fidgets* I have only met his foster father, when we were young. He was okay. No idea what happened to him, Caedes doesn’t want to tell and I won’t push him.
Alright, now we’re going to let the women answer some questions! (Or the one who’s not um…wearing the pants in the relationship…)
11. So, having read the above questions, what do you think about the way you’re significant other answered them?
Caedes: (Wait, are ‘subtly’ telling me that I’m the.. a.. woman?!) What do you expect me to say? I wasn’t really expecting anything else from him, even if it may be abit cheesy. That adorable dork. *smiles fondly*
12. Okay, so some young, supple woman is hitting on your man. What do you do?
Caedes: …Get the woman to back the hell off from my man. Usually they’re gone after a glare and a subtle indication that he’s not up for the grabs. *crosses his arms and cocks an eyebrow*
13. Where do you like your significant other to take you on dates?
Caedes: Nowhere in particular. I dislike crowded areas though when we’re on official dates. I prefer somewhere more… private. *smirks*
14. What is one thing you wish you could change about your significant other?
Caedes: *frowns* I’m not in the position to demand such things. Not like there’s anything I want to change. Except maybe a small little thing, just to get rid of lingering doubts…
15. Disregarding the laws of physics, nature, and gravity… what would the children of you and your significant other be like?
Caedes: We do have a son. Blame it on Arjun but it’s really… nice. He comes after Fidelis with his rather… blunt attitude and the inability to think first. *sighs exasperatedly and rubs his temples* Then there’s Heather, who I adopted. She may not be our daughter by blood, from neither of us, but it feels wrong to leave her out of this. …Fidelis is not allowed to actually rear her. I don’t want her to turn into a woman, or a man-eating monster.
16. As a follow up to the above question, do you want kids?
Caedes: Are you deaf you ignorant being? I -we- have kids. I believe two tiring children are enough.
17. So…. Who is really in charge of the two of you ^_~
Caedes: *smirks deviously* Now that I will gladly answer. *purrs* I am of course, so don’t get anything wrong, you hear me?~
Fidelis: Actua-
Caedes: You’re not allowed to speak here, shush, go away. *pushes him out*
18. So, have you or are you living together? If not, would you want to? If you are, are you happy?
Caedes: We’ve been living together for what? One and a half months now? ….*surpresses the urge to fidget* It’s… something to get used to.
19. So, what do you like most about your significant other?
Caedes: Ah, I knew this was coming~ ….*glares* Don’t you dare making this public to anyone, but damn, the man cares. Cares so damn much, I think I might just die of feelings right on the spot. I don’t know what the hell I did to deserve this – him – but let me be so selfish as to enjoy this. *sighs contentedly and shudders*
Not to mention that hot ass body. Have you seen it? Of course you haven’t. All mine to touch~<3
20. Vanilla or Chocolate?
Caedes: Hmh… I’m not so much for sweet tastes, but I enjoy this… white chocolate. It’s really something. *shrugs*
Alright, so now you get to answer some questions together! =) This should be fun…
21. Alright… what movies do you enjoy watching together and why?
Fidelis: We don’t watch that many movies together but seriously… who invented the romance-genre? Some „romantic“ movies sure can be… touching, but…
Caedes: But no. Just no. The amount of cheesiness makes you want to throw up in a bucket and empty it on the director of the movie.
Fidelis: Not exactly what I would have done, but if you’re fine with throwing up. *merely shrugs*
Caedes: I said „makes you want to“ not that I’m actually going to do it. *frowns* There’s a difference, you boulder.
Fidelis: Oh, boulder. You wound me, not exactly your best. My little singing bird, that was adorable. *snickers*
Caedes: *huffs* I wasn’t even trying to-
Author: Ahem. Gentlemen. The question, please?
Fidelis: …right.
Caedes: *puts his hands on the hips and grumbles* Whatever. Well, horror movies are amusing. Humans can be really stupid-
Fidelis: - it’s fun when he gets startled -
Caedes: *glares* - BUT a few are really interesting with their gorey… methods.
Fidelis: *makes an agreeing sound* Otherwise comedy does the trick too.
22. So…what would be your nightmare date? ^^
Fidelis: *raises eyebrow and grins* Interesting question. *turns his head to Caedes*
Caedes: You’re being asked too. *clears his throat* I’d hate something humiliating. Or maybe getting send away by Arjun to meet with other couples, those joy-lovey-dovey ones who cannot stop licking each other’s faces off, even in public. It’d be really awkward. Espacially if Fidelis would get ‘pulled aside’ again and leave me there.
Fidelis: …the last part was adorable. *grins* And the part were I’m getting pulled aside; it only happened once and that was only for a dance with [insert name here].
Caedes: True, true. Speaking of dances, why have we never danced, Lili?~
Fidelis: *hmphs* Well, you’re not going to let me lead you.
Caedes: Of course I won’t. I’m a better dancer than you and I will not stoop so low as to play the female role, my dear.
Fidelis: Well, I won’t either. Anyways. Any nightmare date for me would be anything where Caedes is greatly uncomfortable. And since I never plan ahead, nothing can get out of order. *shrugs* So there’re not many options to turn it regrettable.
23. Okay, as a follow up to the question above, what would be your dream date?
Caedes: ….*purrs* ~<3 That’ll stay a secret~ *hugs Fidelis and leans on him*
Fidelis: …? *puts an arm around Caedes* Now you’ve piqued my interest.
Caedes: Too bad. Continue.
Fidelis: Yes, yes. *sighs and strokes crowy’s back* I have no particular idea of a so called ‘dream date’. If it happens to be better than perfect than that’s that and it would make me very happy.
24. AWKWARD QUESTION TIME~! <3 How is your love life? (No graphic details plz…)
Caedes: I love it.
Fidelis: I agree… even if we haven’t really reached the most intimate point yet.
Caedes: *gulps and laughs nervously* Well, don’t anyone of you dare blame it on me. I’m still coping with the fact that I’m with a man now. And I haven’t done it with one yet. …I believe.
Fidelis: Wait, you ‘believe’? What of your so greatly polished senses of being able to pinpoint a person’s gender? *looks abit agitated*
Caedes: Don’t get all Rage-Mode on me now. *snorts* It was several years ago and I happened to be drunk that time. There have been confusing mutterings and I’m not that sure anymore if it really was a woman. So it’s not like I was the one literally fucked.
Fidelis: ….
25. So, what are your plans for the future?
Fidelis: *fidgets nervously, trying to contain a straight face* ….
Caedes: *looks at him abit confused* What’s wrong?
Fidelis: N-nothing.
Caedes: *cocks an eyebrow* That’s not exactly nothing.
Fidelis: I’ve just eaten something… unsettling for my stomach again. I feel sick.
Caedes: Ah. *pulls Fidelis down to his chest, resting his chin on the other’s head* I told you not to try eating everything someone is offering you, silly bird. *pets him* Well, as for me… I don’t like planning out the future, that’s unnecessary.
Fidelis: *sighs in a pleased manner* <3
26. MOAR AWKWARD QUESTIONS~! <3 What lies have you told your significant other?
Fidelis: Ah, alright… besides the little one above, I think there are none. Why should I lie to him?
Caedes: ….Sorry. Hey, I’m a liar by nature. *is not amused* I have explained the need of my lies to him and I do not feel the need to inform you of them. ….Wait, you lied to me somewhere above?
27. Do y’all go on group dates?
Fidelis: There’s only us, despite the ‘rules’, so please scratch the „y’all“.
Caedes: Indeed. But no, we don’t usually go on group dates. Though I would like to do so sometime with Arjun…~
Fidelis: Yes. It may be awkward though…
Caedes: ….I know….
28. So, dates aside, what is your favorite thing to do together?
Caedes: Hmm… I love taking flights with him.~ It’s a good way to come across something interesting too, plus points for that. And Fidelili apparently loves cuddling.
Fidelis: There’s nothing wrong with enjoying a good cuddle now and again. The play-fights are also priceless. *smiles ambiguously*
Caedes: Oh, he doesn’t play fair and I thought I was the sneaky one. Tickling is very unmanly, you know? I wouldn’t be surprised if Arjun would do that, but you? *nudges him in the side but has to grin anyway*
Fidelis: *chuckles* You love me for it. *wraps an arm around his waist and snuggles closer to him*
Caedes: Heh, maybe so. …Even if we’re bound to accidentally lose some articles of clothing here and there.
29. Okay, second to last question. You’re almost done!!!! =) Are you and your significant other polar opposites, or do you ‘click’?
Fidelis: We are told that we’re opposites from time to time. *nods*
Caedes: I don’t completely disagree, there have been many situations to prove just that, but there are also times where we can’t act differently. Arjun for example. *chuckles abit amused*
Fidelis: Pretty much, yes. I feel like I’m missing something at the last bit.
30. DANANANAAAAAA~! © Nintendo The last question! Alright, we’re wrapping things up! AND THE FINAL QUESTION IS: Who are you tagging to do this quiz? (…we totally did not run out of ideas or anything like that…)
Everyone with a cute couple that makes me squeal.
